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Deadmau5 style. Fur Shure. That bass is also a TINY bit heavy. Not like you need to worry anywho lol.

Chord progression isnt telling a conclusive story... if that makes sense. But its clean, which in trance is huge. Also, nicely executed sidechain. The kick is a little round for me as well. Something with more of a tight sound. Similar to how the kick works with the clap at like 1:50.

I like it though :D

Stone cold killer.

The beginning of this song is crazy and so intense. There is those two stabs followed by a high pitched squeal though that sounded a bit out of place. Otherwise I love the progression and how it goes from intense to a moment of stillness sort of, and then back to action.

Very good work. Im gonna go check out all your other stuff :)

Michael425 responds:

Its supposed to be like those countdown noises before a race.
Thanks for the great review.

~{425}~

Beautiful

This is one the better and more uplifting songs that I have heard for a long time. I loved every little bit about it. I have no real criticism to offer you :)

Michael425 responds:

Still great to hear that you enjoyed it.
Thanks for the review.

~{425}~

... dissapointed.

You stol the exact style and almost the same damn song from someone else. No i do not have proof but its bugs me so much that i have to leave a comment. It sounds good but the whole song is someone elses and all you did was change the melody a little. I mean its in the same key for crying out loud. UGH.

Im not really mad and you dont have to prove yourself by arguing with me, i understand you were prolly just trying to make somethien really good or just experiment with someone elses style, it just bugs me that you didnt give them credit. and dont say you didnt realize someone else made something like this, it sounds way to close to be a coincidence.

you still get a 7/10

Hotplurplegnome responds:

thanks for the review i see your point and no i was npt experementing with someone elses style acctually im :P
me and my friend were experementing and i took our root file and created this out of it:D
and im afraid its a coincidance
i promise this isint built out of something else:P
unless you are talking about this one....
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/180376
hope you pm me back:P

I saw that you were reading everyones comment so..

I like it, Alot. Its one of the two songs that i saw on the top of the list today that DID NOT suck so much balls it made me want to kill myself, so i commend you for that alone.

My only advice would be to add more bass and go back and remaster it so all the really high volume levels of the song are toned down to below a "im gonna blow your speakers" level.

Great job my friend.

Endeavour responds:

Thanks a lot for the review oracle.

Lol =P im happy this song does not motivate you to commit suicide xD.
But what do you mean with High volume levels ??
I Pitched every piece of treble down in my song, exept for one FX.

Could you be a bit more specific? i dont like high tones =P.

Thanks,
Endeavour and Paperman.

Ladies and Gentlemen let me introduce....

The new Daft Punk.

You really have something going here.
The song is a bit repetitive at times but thats what most electro is anyway so you did fine there. I like the interesting changes you throw in and the Vox is a great tool to use as well.

Again, Great job.

One of the few.

The flow of this song gives a pretty good beat to dance to but sometimes gets a bit Hoo Cha Dah Dow WoofPOW!... What I mean to say is that it gets a bit weird after a bit but it still stays its course.

I rate it as a 7.6/10
Its a good song and for someone who is newer to the techno area of music, you do a fine job in this song.

I look forward to seeing more work as you improve.

Threw me off a bit.

Overall this song is really good. I like the small change in variety while staying within the original context of the song. The synth that is in most of the song is a bit awkward and I don't think it needs to stay in as long. The piano in the end is really good and I would have liked to see more of it throughout the song. The ending is my favorite part. Lastly, the beat throws you off a little in the start... It was a bit hard for me to get the beat at first.

Otherwise this song does a pretty good job of creating a feeling something like a bubbly world. Something remeniscent of the game SPORE. I really like how it sounds unique but not too outwardly weird. Overall I would give it a 6.75/10

Michael425 responds:

yeah, I should of put some more piano in this one.

thanks for the good review man.

Remix this.

I think you should remix the song.

Change the drums. The kick is the most important. Use something more like a sine wave.

Keep all the leads, they work extremely well.

Just use long tones or something for the bassline if you were thinking about putting one in. Although it works without one; makes the song unique.

Other than that, it is a wonderfully put together song, especially if it was formed from loops. Usually loops are more outstanding but it worked well.

I give out longer and more specific reviews of music than the general user will. I generally do reviews of trance and techno but am open to other music as well. If you would like a "professional" review by me then send me a PM.

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