This could very well be the saddest thing you have actually submitted. The storyline was so simple it was like making a flash with poop in the middle of the frame with some silly music in the background. It seemed like you were trying too hard. This flash cannot compete with anything else that you have made. Im also sorry to see that just because of who you are, even people who dont understand the flash or who also think its kinda lame, will still give you a 10. I also don't understand how you got a daily second place.
you get a 4/10 for me because this flash had good animation and good sound quality but everything else sucked.
As harsh as it seemed, this is my honest, unbiased opnion.